hey, what's up people that read this, oh wait no one reads this anyways we won two games one we did really amazing, it was 8 to 0 and the i can't remember 5 tp 0 or something the thing is the season is almost over and it is really sad : ( we have a game tomorrow so yeah
anywho i and on like 390 in my book! i am really excited about it but i am sad cause im almost done with it i really like this story a lot!! i am thinking that i'll write a second one to it i have a plot going on!
okay so what is going on is Jess (i'm changing her name) moves alot then her father decides to to move back to his old hometown, when they get there she finds well an interesting guy. His name is Alex and he is making her life horrible but so much better at the same time. He is trying to help her deal with her mother's death that happened 11 years ago. People are after Alex and decide to take Jess instead. Alex must save her, and during all this her father is falling love again to Jess' dislike.
so for the second one i am thinking about having her mother's killer become part of Jess' life. Jess can't get over her mother's death there is somthing missing, and unforutatly her grandparents are taking her away from her father,her new step-mom, Alex, and her new home. She can't tell anyone about why because well she has no idea either. Jess is really sad and she didn't want to go and leave Alex there waiting for what be forever so she breaks it off with him. they both take really hard. Jess decides she is leaving forever from her grandparents. she goes home and wedding is on, Alex disppeared though, so she has to wait it out, but her old enemy Chris comes back. he has information about her mother's killer. now jess is trying to find her mother's killer and of course her love, Alex.
so anywho, i will be back soon, so talk to you later
Sunday, May 6, 2007
my story
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I saw you on Fang's blog Good Choice
-Jo Homebody (Fang's brother from another mother)
I like the plot line and everything, I think that its a good idea to take Alex away. I'm not thinking that its going to be like New Moon--I read that book recently--as long as he's not leaving her for the same reasons that Edward left Bella you should be fine.
Which I guess he can't because he's not a vampire... but still you see my point.
I say go for it, write another one.
If its something you love to do then DO IT. It doesn't matter what other peoples say, that's their thoughts, their problems not yours.
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XxInk
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