Tuesday, June 19, 2007

taken from home

ok so this is the second part of the new story that didn't have a title, i got a title for it now

Taken from Home. enjoy and comment please!


I felt something heavy on my ankle, I looked at my ankle and there as a device on my leg. I knew exactly was for these people were very smart. This device would keep me here in this town or until a limit but I knew this was bad. I had to free Jeff and myself.

I didn’t know if I should try to escape with this thing on me or get it off. then my mind wondered back to the lone werewolves and vampires that lived with humans maybe there were some here in this town. I really hoped that there was because surely they won’t let down there own kind, would they? This was getting so much harder now. Some much more complex, I knew now that my life would forever change, and I knew one other thing for sure I would find Jeff and save him.

I had to do something so I tried opening the door to find that it was locked. I knew that I could bust the door down but I don’t think that humans could do that and I didn’t need to give these people any reason to believe that I was not “human”. I knew that they were watching I could just tell. I went back to my bed and sat there. what would someone do in this situation? What would my older sister do? She was once caught by real human police and they kept her in a house but she could easily escape, I had to be strong like her. She told me everything that I could possible know about humans. They smelt different then us, and they were like us at all. These humans weren’t as fast or strong, they were so strange to her. It was weird though she said that she wouldn’t mind going back to the town she was taken too she told me and only me there was a boy there that had helped her and started to have strange feelings for him, something she couldn’t really explain. But she came home after my father got worried and came for her. I see the sadness in her eyes, how much she misses that boy, she was never the same after she left that town. I knew that I wouldn’t want to get under a spell like she was so I knew to stay away from humans.

Someone was playing with the doorknob, and then the door opened a little. A young lady stunk her head in. “Oh, good you are awake. Come on I bet you are hungry.” She said leaving and keeping the door open. I stared at the open door, I wasn’t hungry. But I had grown curious of what was outside this small room. I followed her nervous, we walked down some stairs and went into a bright yellow room, it was a kitchen thing. My sister told me about them this was where humans made there food, and mostly ate the food in here too. I stared at the room my eyes adjusting to the bright light from the darkness of my room. This was so different then anything I have seen before. There was a big rectangular thing with two doors, small ones, which a young boy about what looked like my age was digging through. He pulled himself out of the rectangular thing and stared at me.

He had short curly blond hair with big brown eyes and he didn’t seem to pleased with me. He had been wearing bright clothes, the total opposite from me. I was dark haired, that was long and straight, with all black clothes and my eyes a light blue. I could change the color of my eyes and retract my fangs and I knew from my sister that you should never show a human my fangs or my red eyes. I started thinking about home. Would they know? What was I thinking of course they’d know, they could have smelt Jeff’s blood being spilled and since I wasn’t anywhere else and I wasn’t hiding with them of course they’d know I was taken. And Jeff. I had to get him back, somehow, he was like a brother to me. We are the same age, he and I were always hanging out together, doing stupid things, always talking about leaving home and going to see a human town but we’d never really meant it. But now it looks like we got our wish. Well a least I did.

I was actually waiting for Jeff when the men came, I was waiting for him we were going to go running together and go to our spot. We found this old abandon house a couple years back. we would go there to talk about visiting a human town, our parents and the older vampires and werewolves wouldn’t ever have us talking about that. They would be so mad, but now that I was here living me and Jeff, craziest dream I knew why they were so upset with the loner vampires and werewolves. These human towns aren’t for us they are not for our kind.

The kid that was staring at me was the totally opposite from me. There was one thing though I was sure we had in common, we hated each other. He was just so weird and I didn’t like him at all. I knew he felt the same. The young lady that called me started talking again.

“Josh, this is, umm sorry I don’t actually know your name?” She said her big brown eyes staring at me. I was told to give them a fake name, always give a fake name.

“Ron.” It was the first name that came to me.

“Ron,” the young lady said like savoring the word, “you’ll be staying with me and my family, which you are looking at besides my youngest, she is only three years old, her name is Grace. Umm we have to keep you here until you can remember were you come from. I was told that you hit your head and you couldn’t remember anything, an I right?” I stared at her. I remembered everything, very clearly too. I knew though exactly what these people where playing at. I just nodded, I was told never tell them anything about our village, or anything, friends, family, anything. “Josh, make Ron here feel more comfortable, I am going to get Grace.” She said walking away.

Josh stared at me and I stared right back at him. I really didn’t like this kid. “Food is in there, get whatever you want, cups and plates are there.” Josh said pointing at different things. He pointed at the rectangular thing again, and a few small box like things that were connected to the wall. I didn’t want anything so I stood there not knowing what to do. Josh gave me a look like you are crazy. “We have to go to school today, you ready for that run-away.” He whispered to me. I was ready to punch this kid, but I didn’t touch him, not yet. The lady walked in with a little girl in her arms that seemed to be sleeping. The lady walked past me and the little girl put her hand out and touched my face. Her little hand was filled with so much warmth, it was funny thing but her touch actually made me smile.

“You can call me mom if you want or just Lily, it is your choice. I am sure Josh has told you that you have to go to school today. I don’t know why they are pushing me to push you into school so fast, meaning social service, of course. But whatever. Okay then, Josh can help you getting around and to school, I have to drop Grace off, which Josh can you pick her up?” She asked and Josh just nodded, “Okay then I will see you later tonight then.” She finished. She kissed her son on the head and just waved to me. I knew what school was cause I have to go to school to I am just wondering if it will be anything like my school at home. There was one difference already they had it during the day. Josh didn’t seem to want to help me at all. As soon as we hit the corner of the street he found his friends and walked far away from me. I just followed though, who knew if the people who took me were watching. I will be normal today and then tomorrow I will start on what I have to do to get Jeff back.

10 comments:

Ink said...

It was awesome!! Yet again!! I LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Post more of this one too please!!!

XxInk

becca[you dazzle me] said...

i am writing it right now, i am getting to it and thank you!

becca[you dazzle me] said...

ok i have ideas for Jess' new name

Sophia
or
Belle

or do you have anymore suggestions

Ink said...

I don't have any more suggestions.
I like both of them a lot! Pick the one that you like most!

XxInk

becca[you dazzle me] said...

i think i have to go with Sophia

and i am typing up full moon right now

Ink said...

Okay, Sophia it is!

XxInk

becca[you dazzle me] said...

yeah. sophia, mmm good name for her

Ink said...

What does it mean?
Or don't you know?

XxInk

becca[you dazzle me] said...

i don't know i will look it up i just saw it on tv or heard it somewhere or something like that and i kind of liked it so that is how i chose it! but yeah if i find out i'll tell you

Ink said...

Its sounds GREAT!! : D : D

XxInk