another story

back from popular demand cough cough ink cough cough, wanted another one of my stories posted so well here goes nothing. this is my love above of all others, besides my new one, story i wrote. it is called Elerson's (yes that is a GIRL'S name, not a boy's) Whisper. it is a fantasy about people that had there world taken over and now Elerson and the other two chosen ones have to save the world.
so here is goes

Prog.

In the world of, Paviaoia, when there were elves, dwarves, and of course men, there were other races more mystical then the others lived. The world was lost in confusion and death. The king, Worrion was of a different race. His race was called the Belsons, and there were few left in the world. Belsons were rare and if any were found they were forced to work for King Worrion if they refused then they were to live in a dungeon of his castle. Belsons were the only race that knew of all there powers. Elves could do magic but Belsons’ powers were outstanding. King Worrion took over there land Paviaoia. Paviaoia was a beautiful, peaceful place but then Worrion took over, all the races that lived in peace then turned them against each other.

They turned against each other when one race was under attack no other race would come and help. When Worrion attacked another race or clan, his dream came true he knew no one would come to help therefore they destroyed themselves.

Those Belsons’ who are free from Worrion hid in fear. They knew even with there powers they couldn’t beat him. Worrion had become very powerful by controlling people he gains in a way there souls. Belsons had known of a myth of three people from different races who would rule over and bring the races back together. The Belsons hope soon faded into darkness, it turned to knowing that there was no hope left. Every Belsons had been captured that Worrion knew of. Even as King Worrion looked over his land with a pan of water, that was one power of Belsons, he had not seen what was to come. He couldn’t see that there were those who wanted to take over and have the rightful King or Queen rule again.

Chapter 1

A little youngster ran around in a forest, finally the youngster stopped. “Le’Bennie! Le’Bennie!” The youngster called out. It was a young girl no older than 10 years old; the girl was a little tall with long flowing brown with a touch of black hair with bright purple eyes. She saw a pure white light coming through the forest. “Le’Bennie! I didn’t think you would come!” said the little girl really excited. “Elerson, I thought your mother told you not to wonder!” The creature called out, but only Elerson could hear her because she used her mind to speak. The creature made its way through the dark forest that was only light by where trees weren’t growing and the bright light from its fur. Its mane was as bright and danced as it moved closer to Elerson. There was a horn that was just above the eyes, it was sliver and shimmered in the light.

Le’Bennie wasn’t a horse but a unicorn. Elerson looked down in shame. “Well, yes but I had to make sure you were okay. And is it true, are you leaving?”

Elerson asked upset. “Elerson these are troubled times my race is fading and we are leaving this land but I am an oath that I would keep you safe and that’s what plan to do. I promise to watch over you, and one day I will take you with me.” Le’Bennie said her voice became quiet.

“Le’Bennie, what do you mean? Mama always said that I was different. I know you know so tell me. Please.” Elerson asked. Elerson was adventuress, curious girl who was always jumping about.

“Elerson, it is getting dark, your mother would want you home. Now go.” She said pushing Elerson along with her big nose. Elerson gave her a quick hug and ran back the way she came from. Le’Bennie walked the other way her bright fur fading into the darkness of the night.

“Elerson Grate Bronana!” Where were you I was worried sick?! I feared the worst, I hear a gun shot.” A mid-aged women stood in front of a little house covered with weeds and ivy all over, said. She looked upset but her face softened, when Elerson looked at her with big eyes. “I can’t stay mad at you for long. Now, come your dinner is getting cold.” Elerson’s mother, Katie, said with her hands on her hips. Elerson smiled at her, “Mama! I talked to a unicorn again!” Elerson said excited. “Sweetie, the unicorns aren’t here anymore they left, oh but what I would do to see the bright shining fur again.” Katie said holding Elerson close to her. “Mama did father come home yet?” Elerson asked with big eyes. “No.” Katie replied quietly, so quiet that Elerson left it alone. Katie deep inside knew Elerson wouldn’t understand about her father. Most people didn’t. Elerson and her mother lived in a forest away from other villagers. Katie thought it would be best not to mention what the villagers thought of her, and Elerson. Katie was a single mother and back then if you were then you weren’t thought well of. Inside the house Elerson’s mother chased Elerson around.

Elerson thought she had the perfect life, a loving mother and good friends, like the animals and a little elf girl in the village. One day after her mother got home from hunting, Elerson began to run outside but her mother stopped her. “Elerson, you need to tell Le’Bennie that she must leave.” Katie said. “What do you mean, mama? I thought you didn’t believe me about Le’Bennie.” Elerson asked. “Elerson, I will tell you later but now I’m giving you an important job. Now go.” Katie said with a smile. Katie pushed Elerson out of the door. Before Elerson ran out into the forest she ran back and gave her mom a hug then a quick kiss. The bond between Katie and Elerson was unbreakable. They were always alone just the two of them. To Elerson her mother meant everything to her same with Katie.

Elerson ran out to the spot where she usually meets Le’Bennie everyday. She called for her, soon Le’Bennie came into view. “Elerson, so good to see you. How is your mother?” Le’Bennie asked. “She is fine. I know that I shouldn’t say anything but she seems really worried and scared.” Elerson said staring into Le’Bennie’s bright deep blue eyes. “She also told me to tell you that you should leave. But I don’t want you to leave!” Elerson said sad hugging Le’Bennie. “Do not worry; I shall not leave you or your mother.” Le’Bennie said lying down. “But Le’Bennie what does she mean and why is she upset?!” Elerson said. “When you are older.” Le’Bennie said quietly. Elerson laid on her leg and Le’Bennie long mane covered Elerson like a blanket. Later after Elerson make from her nap Le’Bennie let Elerson ride on her back until they reached the edge of the woods. Unlike a regular horse unicorns are bigger, so Le’Bennie leaned down so Elerson could get down. “Mama!” Elerson called out running into her house. Elerson gave Katie a huge hug and almost knocked down her mother.

“Elerson, you were gone along time, weren’t you?” Katie said a little upset.

“Yes, but I fell asleep. Mama… is there something you were going to tell me?” Elerson asked with deep eyes. “No.” Katie said quietly avoiding her eyes. “I know you mama, what is it?”

Elerson tried again. “If you won’t give up then I guess I’ll have to tell you.” Katie began her story with a sigh. “Elerson I can’t tell you everything, you’re too young to understand something’s. Elerson you’re not like other people. Thinking that isn’t right though. Don’t worry about it. I was thinking about your father before.” Katie said to scare to say the truth herself.

“Come on, dinner is ready. Why don’t you help me set the table?” Katie said. Elerson just nodded and followed her mother into there little home.

For the next few weeks everything was the same, summer got colder and was turning into fall. The leaves were changing colors and the days became shorter. Katie became scared and more on the edge. Every once and awhile Katie wouldn’t talk, Elerson would try to break the silence. The question Elerson had asked soon faded. Katie kept Elerson’s mind busy with school work. “Elerson!” Katie yelled. Elerson came running out of the forest. “Come in the house I need to tell you something.” Katie said being so worried and tired took a toll on her. Her blue purple eyes grown deep and her hair started getting gray. Elerson was a little wiser now but hadn’t listened all the time. “Yes, mama.” Elerson asked sitting down at the table. “Have I ever told you what your grandmother taught me?” Katie said. Elerson shook her head. “Never turn on you’re friends, if you did then you’ll be alone.” Katie said staring into space then looked at Elerson with a smile. “Come here.” Katie said and Elerson came closer to her mother and sat in her lap as Katie rocked her back and forward. “Elerson, if anything ever happens to me don’t forget who you are and where you came from.” Katie said looking at the table. “What do you mean? Nothing is going to happen to you.” Elerson said.

“Just promise me.” Katie said. “I promise.” Elerson said then it was quiet for along time and Katie kept rocking her little girl. “Mama, you act is if something is going to happen.” Elerson whispered. Katie didn’t answer but stared at the table. Elerson got up form her mother’s lap and started making dinner a new question burning in her mind. “Ellie, try not to worry about me there are others who need you. You will understand when your older just don’t forget what I have taught you.” Katie said quietly at first. Then it was quiet for along time while Katie helped her young daughter to make there dinner. “It is done.” Elerson said breaking the silence. She wasn’t sure if she wanted to hear what her mother had said.

Two weeks after their talk, when Elerson was coming home from the forest she saw her mother standing on the pouch. “Ellie stay there. And now I love you.” Was all Elerson could tell her mother eyes were telling her. Elerson stood hidden in the mass of trees and bushes. She had heard loud footsteps that marched in time. From outside of the forest the path to the village men marched. There were seven men including the one who was in front of them. He stopped in front of Katie. He began to talk but Elerson was to far away and couldn’t hear what the man was saying. Katie stood her ground not willing to give in to the man words. Elerson soon saw the sign of Worrion. What were his soldiers doing here? Elerson thought. Then the man grew inpatient and stopped her from walking away but still she didn’t give in. The man said one last word before taking his dagger and stabbed it right into Katie’s heart then pulled it out as soon as putting it into her. Within seconds Katie fell to the ground eyes wide with shock. Blood slipped out of her and onto the new red ground.

As Elerson saw her mother fall to the ground it took everything to hold herself back to run to her mother but she knew she had to. Elerson couldn’t but help feeling cold and alone. She was overwhelmed with feelings the only thing that was clear to her was the man’s face in which had killed her mother. He turned his head, Elerson saw all she needed. The man’s face was hard and had a scar going all the way down the left side of his face, his eyes were yellow and usual thing was his teeth were all sharp and when he smiled in Elerson direction she had chills. He was tall and he had dark brown hair. He was strongly built and he showed no signs of caring for the women who was bleeding on the ground. As soon as they were out of sight Elerson ran back into the forest she couldn’t stand seeing her mother that way then she quickly ran back to her mother. She lifted her mother up and felt her body getting colder and colder.

“Mama, no, pleases no. Please say your okay. Mama say something.” Elerson said through tears. Elerson just held her mother close to her. “Ellie, don’t forget who you are. I love you…” Were the last words that slipped out of Katie’s mouth? No one would come to comfort the 10 year old child who was so alone. Le’Bennie felt something was wrong and came to Elerson. Elerson still holding her mother crying Le’Bennie’s eyes on her. Elerson stay and cried until there were no tears felt.

Two months after Katie’s death, Elerson finally decided it was time to leave watching her mother’s grave. By then a women from the village with a kind heart came to take her. Elerson made a grave next to the house for her mother. Elerson visited Le’Bennie. “Le’Bennie!” Elerson called out. Her once nice face turned hard and mad. “Elerson, calm yourself.” Le’Bennie said. “Never! They killed her she-” Elerson said irrupted by tears that felt warm on her face. It had become winter and snow had covered every thing. “I want to leave.” Elerson whispered. “There is nothing left here for me.” Elerson continued. “Ellie you must stay. Your new parent will take care of you. Her son will teach you how to fight. You still have much to learn. Trust me. When your older come to me and I shall help you. If you come anytime sooner I won’t be there. I’m going away I have business. Now go Elerson.” Le’Bennie said. “Bennie! When will I know to come to you?” Elerson asked. “I shall call you.” Le’Bennie said. Le’Bennie light faded in the darkness.

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