ok well i just thought of this cool little story i don't know how are it will get but just wondering your thoughts keeper or trash can?
ok so the story starts just like that so keep reading you'll get it. REMEMBER THIS IS NOT FULL MOON!!!!! OR THE SECOND ONE!!!
So how exactly was I suppose to know she was human. She smelt like us, she seemed interested in the same stuff as us but as soon as I saw her face I knew she wasn’t one of us. But trust me on this one I will never forget her face it was so funny. I mean being able to change into a bat and all that stuff is normal for me but I guess it isn’t for a human. I always thought humans were just like vampires, I guess not. Well that just blew both her and my mind. When I pulled her aside and asked where she lived I should have know right there and then. She wasn’t one of us. She lived in a house and some street called “Moonsand”, usually us vampires and werewolves try to live in streets we have heard of from others. I been around so many elders I should have known, but there are always the ones that live on there own. I was thought that they were lower then us, not important, everyone just talked with venom in there voice when they mentioned them so I shouldn’t have even talked to her for that reason in the first place.
But I was so confused now, everything was strange everyone looked like they could be one of us but there were also so many different creatures like, things wrapped in toilet paper, and people looking like there insides were falling out, or girls in pretty fancy dresses with crowns on there head. Well a least I am over them, I wondered could any of these humans turn into bats, it was strange since I have come from a family and a town of vampires and werewolves I never thought that people were different just had different diets as my mom would tell me. I wondered where she was now, I never really understood what happened. Maybe I should start from the beginning.
My name is Stephen, not Steven by the way, like it is spelled. I am a vampire I was born a vampire into a family of vampires. I lived in a small outcasted town called Phantom. I loved my little town but one day my dad was rushing around telling all of us that we had to hide right away. People were coming, and everyone was rushing and going to there houses, but I didn’t make it. these people showed up before I could leave the playground me and my friends were hanging out at. In human years I was around 15 years old, in vampire years I was 18. but the time difference wasn’t that great but that isn’t the point. These men came up to me they were wearing really ugly suits that looked stiff. They had badges saying serving and protecting or something really stupid thing like that. One man came up to me and shined a light in my face and I stared at him with narrow eyes.
“What?” I said calmly trying to make myself seem normal.
“Um, kid what are you doing out here? Are you a run-away?” He said looking to my eyes, and he shook his head. “Kids today wearing these colored eye contacts.” He added under his breath.
“Um, no.” I answered wondering what colored eye contacts were. I never heard of them before. I just shrugged it off saying that he was the weird one here, he must be since his eyes weren’t vampire like and he didn’t smell like a werewolf. This most be the real thing, real people.
“Then what are you doing out here?” The other one said this time sounding nervous. I stared at this one for a bit. He was younger then the other guy, a lot younger he was shaking ever so slightly and he was looking around.
“Johnson! Would you stop looking around this town is not haunted, just cause no one lives here doesn’t mean jack!!” The older man said. This man was tall, and kind of big and was bald, he didn’t seem nervous at all. But I was distracted people not living here, many people, well vampires and werewolves, live here, maybe he was scared of vampires and werewolves but I didn’t understand why? What was so scary about us?
“kid you better come with us. What is your name?” The older man said. I looked at him and swallowed, I didn’t want to go with him. I lived here I was home, I was perfectly safe I wouldn’t leave with him.
“NO! I live here!” I yelled at him.
“So you are a run-away, kid you have to come with us!” The man said boldly. I shook my head, this can’t be happening I wasn’t going to leave my family or my town.
“NO!” I yelled. Then Jeff my best friend in the world and I have known him my whole life, aka he is a werewolf, showed up. I stared at him as he walked up behind the two men in his wolf form. I stared at him wide eyed, what was he going to do? I know that he could change any time he wanted, well sort of him was learning but most of the time it was when he was mad. And he must have been mad, I have never seen him growl and show his teeth to anyone before. His jet black fur mixing in with the night. But one of the men like knew he was coming. The really nervous one attacked him without even thinking about it. Jeff was as shocked as I was cause the guard wasn’t even facing him. I stared wide eyed, the man took him down in seconds.
“I guess I was right this town is full of vampires and werewolves! I bet he is one of them. This werewolf tried to protect him; we have to take out now!” The young one said quietly. No, Jeff, what was I going to do these humans knew about us, and I was thought that humans didn’t know about us vampires and werewolves. I was so lost. I stared at these two men.
“All I know is that, that kid you took down is obvious a werewolf and all we can tell about this kid is that he is a vampire obsessed, run-away. We can’t take him anywhere without knowing for sure! Gosh Johnson, you have to learn that not everyone is a vampire or a werewolf. We’ll take him and put him with a fake family and if he is a normal teen we’ll know if he isn’t and a vampire then we will know that too. All I can say is knock the damn kid out and we’ll take both him and the werewolf just to be safe.” The older man said quietly giving me fake smiles every once and a while thinking that I probably didn’t know what they were saying and I was ready to run but there was no way I was leaving Jeff by himself so I was planning in my head but before I could take action the young kid did.
It was blacker then the black night I was so use to living in. the sun would shine soon and I wasn’t ready for it I needed time! Well one thing I knew I was leaving my hometown and my best friend and I were in trouble, big trouble. There was nothing I could do, I had to act like a human but I didn’t know how to act like one, could I really pull this off? Could I really save me, Jeff and more importantly our families. Everything seemed to far off now. All I knew was I needed dark clothes and time to get ready for the sun.
See for so many years vampires looked for a way to go in the sun we found that our skin doesn’t burn if we wear dark clothes, like black or so, and we had to wear this stuff called sun-skin-lotion it was too block the sun off of us. This was the best we could do and well actually it worked, very well. So these people think that they can keep me here weren’t smart because I could just run home and find my parents and Jeff’s and have them help me find Jeff.
Wednesday, June 13, 2007
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Hey, I can't read this right now because my times up on the net... but I'll try and sneak on later and check it out okay? If that doesn't happen then I'll for sure check it out tomorrow!!!
I promise!!
XxInk
it is okay but remember i won't be home pretty much all day so i will post elerson's story but i can't get to full moon, but as soon as possible i will and it is ok
Okay, I'll most def read this later... like I told you my time's up for now... but I'll be on later and this will be the first thing I read!
XxInk
I liked it a lot!!!!!!!!!!!
I think that Stephen's character was really cool. Another thing that you might want to tweak is how the guard took out Jeff, and which one it was.
Other then that I say its a keeper!!!!!! : D
XxInk
ok, i will fix that and i am going to write it on the side but probably i will really get into it for a while but i can't forget about the second Full Moon
That's okay! I want to read more of New Moon anyways!
XxInk
i will try to get it up as soon as i can but i got more to type up for chapter 3 but i will get right on it
Take your time!
XxInk
i am sort of, i got like three more pages to type up then it will go up
: )
Ooooo! Sweet!
XxInk
posted it!!! now i just have to type up the rest of the whole thing! yeah and that is other thing, everyone is like oh i will type it for you, umm no cause i change things or add stuff other people can't type it for me
Nobody has ever asked me if they could type for me... recently at least. Lith used to when I was a really slow typer, then I taught myself how to and I do okay with it.
She has fun watching me type she's all like "Its so weird watching you type" because I didn't get taught in school so I had to teach myself so yeah...
XxInk
oh ok, well i was taught at school sort of but i am a slow learner so while everyone is like timing 100 words a minute i am typing 50, but i really didn't have a computer class in middle school and now in high school i had a computer class, by the way the teacher was crazy, and anyways i still don't type very fast but i can type somewhat fast
Me too. I know someone, when he types it sounds like he's just randomly pushing the buttons as fast as he can, but its like perfect.
I just can't do that!
XxInk
omgosh, i could never do that i look down at the keyboard all the time but sometimes i am fine but like if i am copying one of my stories i look up and it is like this jadiljhang ahsadeh ashdfn yeah so i am like oh crap that stinks
I could never either. I was completely amazed when I heard how fast he was typing.
I was thinking HOLY FREAKING CRAP.
XxInk
haha, there are so many people that can type like super fast in my class, like last year one of the students challenged our BMA (computer class) teacher and the kid beat her and she was so ticked off it was funny!
Hahahahahahaha!!! That's great! I love it when people who think that their the teachers (or are in this case) get schooled!
XxInk
yeah was really funny. i hated that teacher so much though she was crazzzzyyyy
Crazy how?
XxInk
way WAYYYYY too HAPPY, and she is just really creepy i don't know really you have to met her to fully understand
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