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okay so i will be out all day well actually 12 to 6 at a party and i thought i would leave you all with this it is chapter 3 for ELERSON WHISPER!!

Chapter 3

They rode hard into the night not stopping. Elerson and Sonya lost all feeling in there hands and legs, Sonya started to fall asleep and began to slip off too. Elerson was falling asleep too but she was more awake then Sonya was. Sonya let go and fell off Alanergon. Elerson started to laugh and the unicorns stopped and Elerson fell off herself. “Elerson, I think it is better id we stop and sleep here.” Le’Bennie said. “Yeah.” Elerson said falling asleep already. Sonya was the first to fall asleep, older elves stay awake but younger went to sleep. Elerson turned away from the view of everyone. There were trees circling them and all she could see was trees. Soon everyone was asleep.

Elerson was the first to wake up but she only slept two hours. “Elerson…”Elerson heard a whisper. Then she heard hooves. They she heard footsteps, all was quiet besides the footsteps and she knew it wasn’t Sonya. It was still dark so Elerson quietly rolled into the bushes. While Sonya was left alone with Le’Bennie and Alanergon went to get a drink of water. The person who come off the horse was a young man, he looked like a ranger, rangers were men who were on there own and were outcasts most people didn’t trust them. He was really young for a ranger, he looked only 16 to 17 years old, and his hair was brown and his eyes here dark and almost looked like the ocean, he was tall and strong. He wore a black cloak and it was to dark to see what other color his clothes were but on his back he wore a bow and arrows and he had a sword. In his hand he held a dagger and walked as quiet as he could towards Sonya.

Sonya woke up and saw him coming closer to her. She didn’t have enough time to react, she didn’t move at all before the young ranger got to her. The ranger pulled her up, “Don’t say anything.” He whispered to Sonya. This seemed weird, rangers never done this before. He walked over to the horse and told Sonya, “Get on.” He said quietly. He wasn’t the talking type he said little but got his point across. She didn’t say a word. The ranger jumped up behind her. Then the ranger took the reins and took off. Without another word they were out of sight. Elerson jumped up when she heard the hooves were dieing away. Elerson was left alone and she sat scared for her friend and her.

Le’Bennie and Alanergon didn’t return until the morning had come. “Elerson, where did Sonya go? We must leave now!” Alanergon said. “A ranger took her!” Elerson said quietly; she felt like she failed them all. “Le’Bennie what do we do know, we can’t stay here. We don’t know if they have her or not? It’s too dangerous! The Alosta is no place for anyone, that smell of humans.” Alanergon said. “Yes, I know. Elerson we can not stay in this forest a day longer. The ranger will know this too. I hate to leave Sonya in his care but that is all we can do for now. Now get on, quickly.” Le’Bennie said forcefully. “But, I don’t want to lave it up to some ranger, how do we know he isn’t working for Worrion?!” Elerson yelled. “There isn’t much we can do know. We don’t know if he does or doesn’t well have to trust Sonya to get out herself for now.” Le’Bennie said getting upset. Elerson wanted to protest but she knew when Le’Bennie sounded like that, it was best to listen to her. She jumped on Le’Bennie’s back and they rode off.

There was a noise behind Elerson when they rode away Le’Bennie looked back quickly. “Oh, no.” She whispered then took off with speed Elerson wasn’t use too. She held on even tighter then before. Then it got bumper and harder to stay on. Elerson looked behind her to see what Le’Bennie was afraid of, and then she saw the trolls. Trolls were big ugly, warty creatures, they usually were about 6 to 8 feet tall, they had really bad breath and they were one of the most unfriendly races. The smelled bad but most were really fat and no one messed with them. They were on the trail of the unicorn’s and Elerson; they had a strong sense of smell. Elerson didn’t know how far they got in the forest, trolls lived deep in forest or mountain ranges; they liked dark areas. “Le’Bennie! Do you think that is what the ranger knew about?” Elerson said. “Yes.” Le’Bennie said quietly.

They ran fast into the night, Elerson forget how far they went into the forest. The troll’s attack got worst when the trolls gained on them; they were getting closer and closer to Le’Bennie. Elerson tried to kill one but her aim was bad and bumpy she missed her target by inches. The troll’s growled at Elerson’s arrow; there scream was deep and gave Elerson chills. Every twist and turn Le’Bennie took, Elerson felt sick. The turns were sharp and quick, and Elerson had to hold on tighter. Through the night Elerson looked back and saw or heard no more trolls. Most probably gave up because they were too hungry or Le’Bennie lost them. Le’Bennie didn’t stop; soon the trees decreased and trees got smaller meaning that the forest was ending.

At morning Elerson, Le’Bennie, and Alanergon finally got out of the Alosta forest. The sun blinded Elerson’s eyes; the Alosta forest was dark and damp so the sun felt warm and bright on Elerson. As far as Elerson could see there was a big meadow and small hills; on the right side where hills made of rocks. In the distance there were mountains with snow tops which looked so beautiful in the sun. But nothing could stray Elerson’s mind from Sonya. “Le’Bennie we have to find Sonya! Rangers aren’t to be toyed with and know he has a half grown elf, he could take her to Wor-” Elerson began to say. “Don’t say that name.” Alanergon answered quickly. “Why?” Elerson asked confused. “It is a dangerous name to say around here.” Alanergon said on his guard. Elerson didn’t reply.

ok so opinions anyone?